For several years now I have been writing haiku. For me it is a deep personal connection to my life and surroundings. I enjoy this form of poetry because of the structure it gives. It is typically a 5-7-5, three sentence format. The short poem is comprised of 17 syllables in total.
They are poignant, contemplative and often describe the mundane in surprising ways. I call my haiku, zanshin haiku because I am most aware of my present when I write them.
The term zanshin, when used in the martial arts embodies having a total awareness. It means being aware of one’s surroundings, while being prepared to act. For me its an appropriate method of haiku, since they usually come to me in a flash when I’m in the moment. My haiku aren’t profound, at least I don’t think so, but each one is relevant to me and to a moment in my life that required I capture it this way. Some people take pictures. I take pictures too, I just use words. Here are some of my word pictures:
Forgiveness
A dying ember
Love springs reborn in my heart
Wiping all things new.
Winter
Bitter winds cutting
Empty branches embracing
My world is frozen.
Little boy
Innocence and joy
Hanging on your mother’s hip
Love. No conditions.
Grief
Fading yet present
Memories of the future
Embracing my mind.
Bliss
Unconditional
Love expressed by a soft touch
Rest your head on me.
These are a few of my zanshin haiku. Each of these has a story behind them-but I will keep those a secret for now. Eventually I will compile them and put them in book form ( once I discover that eighth day), in the meantime I will share them here with you.
Let me know what you think. I enjoy hearing from you. If you wish, please share some of your poetry here with me. Do you enjoy haiku or not?
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This is a haiku
But I know not what to write
I am no poet
🙂
Luke
That is excellent
I didn’t know you haiku
Thank you for sharing!
Orlando